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FINALLY DROWNED

She was sinking
in the bottomless sea,
Her demons pulling her down
whom only she could see.

She knew she had to fight them
but couldn't resist their allure,
knowing that deep down
this was her desire.

Now she sat at the bottom of the sea
the waters churning around her,
the sound called advices of her loved ones
slowly and painfully chocking her.

She wanted to cry out for help
but there was no one around,
she knew that no one will ever know
that the little girl had finally drowned.

Comments

  1. Fanny Astikasari29 September 2017 at 07:27

    Deep, love it so much 🙌

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    1. Siddhi Pathak29 September 2017 at 07:30

      THANKS A LOT😀😀😀😀

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  2. Unknown29 September 2017 at 10:23

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  3. Unknown29 September 2017 at 16:53

    Very deep poem

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  4. Siddhi Pathak29 September 2017 at 19:52

    Thank u verge much!😊😊

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  5. RoyalPunkin30 September 2017 at 02:40

    Being weighed down by life. Sorry, that's how I'm looking at it. This made me think, good work!

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  6. Siddhi Pathak1 October 2017 at 08:06

    That's exactly what I wanted my readers to think! THANK YOU ALL.

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  7. Unknown23 October 2017 at 12:31

    This is amazing!

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